Correction exam

I can not decide about one holiday, but I write about the last holiday.

In the last august, I went to México to see my first love, because we are in love.

She is the best beatiful girl in the world.

We went to the cinema and we watched a movie; the tittle was "Pixeles".

Also we went to buy a coffee to "Cielito lindo". We talked about us.

After I saw her and the saw me; I said you "I love you" and she said the same.

Now, I am not her boyfriend and she is not my girlfriend, but soon we will be.

“My (most embarrassing/scariest/funniest) experience” (Original)

I remember a while back, when I was in high school, there was a girl who I liked; she was a beatiful girl, of the same age, her name was Gisella. She and I, we had talked for some time, we had something especial (which this is important).

One day I was in the school; I had a free hour and I decided to go to play with my friends, but the day was not sunny, it was actually rained, so the soccer field was wet; It was my turn and I had to kicked a penalty: I looked at her and I said that shooting was dedicated to her.

So I kicked the ball, but I slipped and fell. She looked me and just with a smile, but I felt embarrassed  while others laughed. That day, I learned that I should not play when the soccer field is wet.

"MY FAVOURITE QUOTE" (Correct)

“They made us believe that each one of us is half of an orange, and the life just has meaning where we find the another half. They did not tell us that we are born whole, that nobody in our life deserves load on the backs, the responsability complete that we do not have”.

John Lennon

This is my favorite quote because many people think that the happiness depends on another person, and it is not true, life has many valuable things and those things can make us happy without depending from somebody else.

Imagine those people who never get married for several reasons they are happy but in their own way.

That´s why I really like this quote because it brokes that stereotype. Definitely this is a great idea from the famous singer John Lennon.

MY FAVOURITE QUOTE (Corrections)

"MY FAVOURITE QUOTE" (Original)

"They made us believe that each one of us is half of an orange, and the life just has meaning where we find the another half. They did not tell us that we are born whole, that nobody in our life deserves load on the backs, the responsability complete that we do not have".

John Lennon

This is my favorite quote because many people think that the happiness depends on another person, and it is not true, because the life has many valuable things and those things can make us happy without depending from somobody else.

Imagine those people who never get married for several reasons they are happy but in their own way.

That´s why I really like this quote because it brokes that stereotype. Definitely this is a great idea of the famous singer John Lennon.

“MY GREATEST ACHIEVEMENT” (Correct)

Nowadays, I don’t have a greatest achievement, I have great things I have achieved so far and could not choose between all, however I remember one in particular, I studied at COBAEV, a teacher made me an invitation to a contest in the scientific fair, after much insistence I accepted.

I worked for a few months and won the regional phase. Then I went to the state stage, and that day I participated, I got sick. The teacher was worried so much about me and the competition because we had been working hard and my presentation was not safe due to my status health.

Despite that I could take a chance and I did the presentation and I got a reward, My team got the second place in the state, and there I learned that no matter what obstacles are  when you want to achieve great things.

“MY GREATEST ACHIEVEMENT” (Corrections)

“MY GREATEST ACHIEVEMENT” (original)

Nowadays, I don’t have a greatest achievement, I have great things I have achieved so far and could not choose between all, but, I remember one in particular, I studied at COBAEV, a teacher made me an invitation to a contest in the scientific fair, after much insistence I accepted.

I worked for a few months and won the regional phase. Then I went to the state stage, and that day I participated, I got sick, the teacher was worried so much about me as the same as the competition because we had been working hard and my exposition was not safe due to my status health.

Despite that I could take a chance and I did the exposción and gott a reward, My team finished in second place in the state.

Letter of my course expectations.(Correct)

Córdoba, Ver.

ITESM

CAMPUS CENTRAL DE VERACRUZ

13 December 2015

Dear Mrs.:

My expectations in this semester are high. First I will do my best to increase my grades especially in English and upload all my homeworks on time and complete. During this semester I will create and develop my blog adding interesting information, I will take extra courses in order to improve my English level and knowledge. 

Letter of my course expectations (corrections)

Letter of my course expectations (ORIGINAL)

Córdoba, Ver.

ITESM

CAMPUS CENTRAL DE VERACRUZ

13 December 2015

Dear Teacher:

My expectations in this semester are high,  first I will do my best to increase my grades especially in English and upload all my homeworks at time and complete. During this semester I will create and develop my blog adding interesting information, I will take extra courses in order to improve my English level and knowledge.